*
She twirled in the Santa Ana winds
like a satellite finding its orbit in the driveway.
The Eagles Greatest Hits played for the fifth time in a row
because letting it play was easier than finding another album
that everyone drinking could tolerate.
She really liked singing along to Desperado.
You felt indestructible, even knowing that when reality
returned, the woman you watched would be someone else’s wife.
But it could wait. Let it wait. Let it hang there like the moon.
No need to even mention it.
You couldn’t blame the alcohol, because you drank
yourself sober long before, and can’t pretend
you didn’t know what was coming, when she stepped back
inside, the wind still whispering around her, remarked that
the stars had brought you here, and then looked in your eyes,
and said oh so seriously, that infidelity isn’t a problem
but a symptom of a problem,
and you, of course, agreed.
-Brent Allard
Indeed! Well maybe they'll read a cautionary tale like the one above.
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying the truth of this. Good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jhon! Glad you enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteSets a definite tone through comfortably subdued imagery that illuminates an uncomfortable reality.
ReplyDeleteWow. That was an awesome review I just wrote.
simple honest narrative and therefore deeply touching. you write really well :)
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading your writing, a story in perfect poetic form, you have a way with sharing the images and feelings so well. The message, yes a tough one. Great poem Brent
ReplyDeleteThank you Kap, Lash and Bernadine! I appreciate your kind words!
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